Friday, February 17, 2012

Tomorrow, I love you tomorrow!


I’ve taken all the beating and t’was the final blow, would it be all right if I felt a little low? All my miseries are about to be laid to rest, and I know that tomorrow, you won’t be here to test. I’ve managed the ordeal, and you’ve delivered your sermon too, eventually, I’ll rise above and join the worthy few, so let me hold this fleeting moment in my palms, and bid goodbye to past with open arms.

Like setting a bird free?

Perfection is not in men, but deeds, the little intentions that fill up all needs. For perfect men haven’t existed in spirit and body alike, an Adonis at heart, with a flaw in the spirit slight? What maketh of man, if not his deeds, that only surpass and transcend creed. If I told you the secrets, as I held them dear, would they help me, conquer all fear?

Like putting faith in faith?

You’d fail and fall, and I’d be hurt too, but ignited souls, are only, but few. I too would fail, hah! That isn’t something new. Perfection is in character, to persona it is loosely bound, elsewhere it’d be sought, but would never be found.

It’s within, not without.

So fall down today, for it shall be the last failing, the seas will drown themselves, tomorrow we set sailing. With tonight’s moon out, let the miserable tides swell, past the night, the sea is ours to dwell.

A new euphoria fills the morning hereafter, ahoy!!


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जीवन भी अजीब है न, हिरन कि भाँती | जीवन भर सार ढूँढ़ते बहार ही घुमते रहते हैं, और तत्व एवं सत्य है कि हमारे अंदर बैठ कर जीवन को महकाता रहता है, कस्तूरी की तरह | त्रिश्नायें क्षणभंगुर हैं, बुलबुले सी, अभी हैं, और अगले ही पल नहीं | परन्तु इन्द्रियों को तो बाह्य ज्ञान ही महसूस होता है, भीतर से तो केवल एहसास की अनुभूति होती है, जो इन्ही इन्द्रियों से व्यक्त होती है | भीतर अरण्य है, पूरी तरह से पत्तों से आच्छादित | एक पगडण्डी है इसमें, जिस पर हम निरंतर चलते हैं, और संकेत ढूँढ़ते हैं, बाहर |


30 comments:

Ankita Ghosh said...

Oh! It's beautiful. The choice of words, the poetry woven within; some lines I found to be utterly profound:

"For perfect men haven’t existed in spirit and body alike, an Adonis at heart, with a flaw in the spirit slight?"

And

"With tonight’s moon out, let the miserable tides swell, past the night, the sea is ours to dwell."

:-)

Cheers

the other side of me said...

Awww..really really perfect.."With tonight’s moon out, let the miserable tides swell, past the night, the sea is ours to dwell."...I can relate to the euphoria that fills in the morning..

I think I shld thank u for this post :)

Rohini said...

Took my heart away. Profoundly beautiful. Very authentic and delightful with wonderful expression. Thank You!

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Wonderful! The lines were just too good. The way it all went flowing, the lines in the italics that you added.. It was a beautiful read :)
You post less, but when you do, your work is just brilliant :)

Dreaming Wanderer said...

Beautiful poem.. filled wid so much energy and power.. D meanings well weaved with absolutely adept words..

loved these lines:

What maketh of man, if not his deeds, that only surpass and transcend creed.. If I told you the secrets, as I held them dear, would they help me, conquer all fear?

Perfection is in character, to persona it is loosely bound, elsewhere it’d be sought, but would never be found.

nil said...

"I’ve managed the ordeal, and you’ve delivered your sermon too, eventually, I’ll rise above and join the worthy few, so let me hold this fleeting moment in my palms, and bid goodbye to past with open arms."



"So fall down today, for it shall be the last failing, the seas will drown themselves, tomorrow we set sailing. With tonight’s moon out, let the miserable tides swell, past the night, the sea is ours to dwell."


What do I say, Blasphemous?
What you wrote was a whole lot of faith, and I'm a common face with a simple heart. And that heart is weeping at the beauty of inspiration, and inspiration so honest.

Thank you, I really needed this today.

BluBluBling said...

I’ve managed the ordeal, and you’ve delivered your sermon too, eventually, I’ll rise above and join the worthy few, so let me hold this fleeting moment in my palms, and bid goodbye to past with open arms."

These lines made my day :) Beautiful :D

Blessed be :)

Rià said...

I am bewitched and enchanted by ur words...ever so beautiful!!
'So fall down today, for it shall be the last failing, the seas will drown themselves, tomorrow we set sailing. With tonight’s moon out, let the miserable tides swell, past the night, the sea is ours to dwell...'

Lovely lines!!

Kunal said...

What a poetic post...
This is one of the best. Profound, meaningful and optimism..all brewed in to one...

Thank you for this..

Rose said...

So deep and profound. I like how you can use words to describe this subtlety that we all experience and long to share but are unable to express the same.

Enchanting lines. :)

adreamygal said...

Starts and ends with so much of positivity. Poetry in form of prose, and little words highlighting those,makes it a perfect read. Although the shudh hindi was little tricky to understand, it was very very inspiring. Thanks ! :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Ankita
Thank you, I am glad you liked it.

@TOSM
Thank you too :)

@Rohini
:) Welcome here.

@Juhi
Thank You :)

@Dreaming Wanderer
Thank you, I am glad you liked it :)

@Nil
You made my day :D

@BluBluBling
And your words made mine :)

@Ria
:)

@Kunal
Thank You!

@Rose
:-) Thank You!

@adreamygal
:) Thank you!

inquisitive-life said...

"You’d fail and fall, and I’d be hurt too, but ignited souls, are only, but few. I too would fail, hah! That isn’t something new. Perfection is in character, to persona it is loosely bound, elsewhere it’d be sought, but would never be found.

It’s within, not without."

This is so me!!! I wish I can express in the same way you do. Adding that poetic touch.. Bless Man...

Bless You :)

Confused Soul said...

this was so beautiful and also meaningful.. Loved every bit!

You write and express so well..this just took my heart away :)

jo said...

Kal hi to hai jo humein nayi ummeed deta hai, nayi shuruat ka mauka deta hai. Tomorrow is indeed worth loving and waiting for. So is your poetry... :)

Ph_ said...

*Like putting faith in faith?*

As always, excellent!
Tomorrow is indeed better than yesterday. I wonder why I never believe in that... :/

Sunakshi said...

So fall down today, for it shall be the last failing, the seas will drown themselves, tomorrow we set sailing.

What a beautiful read.
This is one of my favorite place where i get perfect Hindi and English reads :)

KHOJ said...

Wow lovely words...
if past is holding you, set free...tomorrow belongs to you...

Suruchi said...

Each little paragraph is like a complete poem in itself...pregnant with the deepest and most soothing of thoughts.

Rarely does one see Blasphemous Aesthetic romantic...and when he is, he is like none other. I had to read this thrice to get it entirely though I am still not sure I have got all of it minus the context. It is less for a woman and more of within one's own self...

First you gave us the hermione and now the kasturi...more rare jewels to emerge in the days to come for sure:-)

Did I mention somewhere though before...that I loved the poetic expressions to the core? :-)

A grain of sand said...

Introspective and thoughtful! Bahut umda :)

subtlescribbler said...

A thoughtful post with quite a few lessons to learn.
Its not everyday that one comes across a post as beautifully crafted as this. so thank you :)


sarah

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Inquisitive
Great! But you do have your own style matey.

@Confused Soul
Send out a search party, it's time your heart returned back :P
Thank You for appreciating.

@Jo
Thank You!

@Princess
:)

@Sunakshi
:) Thank You.

@Khoj
Past holds lessons, we need to learn.

@Suruchi
And you rhyme praises as well :D

@A grain of Sand,
Neha, if I remember the name right, thank you :)

@Sarah
Thank You too :)

Gina Gao said...

great post! I really like how you write.

www.modernworld4.blogspot.com

Felicity said...

Loved the post. :)

Thanks a bunch for the comment that you left on my blog. I'm busy with parhai so don't get to use blogger all that much these days.

Hope you're doing good. Miss reading your blog!

Best,

Sara

Rohini said...

Because you truly deserve it.. :)
http://solitudesublime.blogspot.in/2012/02/when-you-are-happy-and-you-know-it.html

Purba said...

I love how you have structured it. And thank God life gives us second chances.

Beautifully composed Anshul, simply loved it!

Chintan said...

//If I told you the secrets, as I held them dear, would they help me, conquer all fear?//

I too think so. But, I reveal my secrets through abstracts and so many can relate to those and live the life I am avoiding.

Neha Shandilya said...

So brilliant and positive.. :)
Good to have discovered your blog..

Deepika said...

" If I told you the secrets, as I held them dear, would they help me, conquer all fear?
Like putting faith in faith?"

Thought provoking.. felt like a sinking ship sung its story before residing in waves.

KP said...

Just beautiful! and I cant say anything else

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