Saturday, October 16, 2010

Break Me, make Me.




1:            “Paint yourself for me to see”
2:            “I can’t, my hands crooked.”

1:            “Then sing yourself to me.”
2:            “It’s no better than a screech”

1:            “Intoxicate me with your touch”
2:            “I am a harsh flame, I burn”

1:            “Drench me in your rain”
2:            “I am a cold winter wind”

1:            “Let me in”
2:            “There are no slits”

1:            “There is no wall”
2:            “Nothing ever existed”


2:            “Pull me out”
2:            “Redeem me”
2:            “Purge me”
2:            “Revive me”

1:            “Make me a sinner!”

28 comments:

Cinderella said...

Redeem - purge - slits....this piece seems to have been pulled out of some recess inside my mind. Its only now I realize I use these words so often.

Maha said...

very intense. I am going to read it again now.

nOt anyone you know said...

what does one say when someone is speechless?

Beyond Horizon said...

There is no wall”
“Nothing ever existed”....liked it
2 deep n thoughtful....wat a choice of pic 2!!

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Cinderella
Sometimes, an outburst is enough to let loose for the rest of the time.

@Maha
:) Welcome here

@Bhavika
umm... 'mum' is the word? :P
Thank You!

@Beyond Horizon
Thank You!

AS said...

hey!
thats really so good :D

it is an intoxicating dose of poetry :)

Nostalgic said...

That was deep.. I could relate.

Shadow said...

excellent. you've captured perfectly human emotion and reactions...

D.A said...

!

Thinking said...

hmm....

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@AS
Thank you for appreciating

@Nostalgic
Am glad you could, how are you?

@Shadow
:)

@D.A
O_o

@Thinking

still thinking?

Saumya said...

intense....deep....it hit with a bang!!

Tanvi said...

Strange use of words, with the right kind of emotions entangled together making it a really very thoughtful post.....

Great Anshul!

Cheers,

rantravereflect/ jane said...

wow- oxymoronic n nice :)i love contradictions.

TurbulentMind said...

just wow..have no other words..

mk said...

intense emotions but sometimes...you don't need to do that!!..

loved the way you portrayed it.

Madhu said...

deep thought..wait i minute,it will take me a 6-7 readings to get ur point!

A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...

Hi, didn't know you could write such intense deep stuff, words rather.

very intense.

RESTLESS

Bea said...

OMG!! Thats sooo intense! Great piece..

Komal Ali said...

I don't know why I'm always so late in commenting on your posts...by the time I read them, your much sincere readers have already said what I want to say...

Intense! Love it. :)

Jaspreet said...

Hey BA, first of all m so sorry for being so late to comment on this beautiful piece.The helpless voice pleading for being rescued and that too without explicitly mentioning it, is what makes it an outstanding piece. Numerous thoughts crossed my mind while reading it and it took me a long time to comment on it.
Nice job BA :)

Princess said...

A new expression I read on your blog .... hmm... Interesting !

Princess said...

The image scares me though =/

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Saumya
Thank you!

@Tanvi
:) Thank you, how are you now? get well soon.

@Jane
:) Contradiction is a contradiction in itself, like contrasting addiction.

@Turbulent
:)

@mk
and sometimes, you just need to do that.

@Madhu
do let me know what do you infer.

@Restless
I don't know if I can. :P

@Bea
Thank You

@Komal Ali
you need to take care of yourself first, everything else can wait.

@Jaspreet
Thank you Jaspreet!

@Princess
I wish I can add a few more. We'll see...
can't say anything about the image though.

bebo ♥ said...

Ahhh...lovely...:) Love itt..

Sayak said...

1. Bind me, enslave me, lock me up in your prison.
2. I'm serving life imprisonment.

Great one. :)

Enchanting!
Liberating!
Fulfilling!

Sh@s said...

It made me not just read more than once but actually made me think so deeply, such is the intensity of these words and the way you have expressed it.
Keep it up!

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