Friday, October 8, 2010

लिख के मिटाऊं, मिटा के बनाऊं !


कह दूं आज के पत्थर की लकीर हो,
कल मिट जाए तो अचरज क्यूँ ?
लक्ष्मण रेखा खींचने वाले ने भी न सोचा था,
बाह्य तृष्णाएं प्रवेश न कर पाएं,
मन विचलित कर रक्षित के कवच भेद देता है!!

मस्तिष्क रेखाएं खींच ले असंख्य,
मन उल्लंघन आतुर है,
चोट लगी थी कभी बीते कल में,
अब तो युग बीत चले होंगे,
शायद, इस बार कुछ अलग हो जाए!!

फिर उन पुराने जख्मों को कुरेदने का मन हो आया है,
देखें अब भी दर्द कि वाही तपिश बाकी हो?
कैसे अँधेरे थे वे, जिन में दफ्न हो जाने की चाह थी,
शायद पीछे छूट गए हैं वह अँधेरे,
आज बाहर से ही उनकी गहराई नाप कर देखूं!!

माचिस की लौ में देखा था एक चेहरा,
धूमिल प्रकाश में कभी कुछ उभरता,
फिर अँधेरे में लीन हो जाता था,
छूना चाहा तो एक हँसी छोड़ गया था मेरे हाथों में,
उजाले में आँखें मूंदे वही स्पर्श तलाशता हूँ अब!!
मेरा दुःख बड़ा ! नहीं, मेरा दुःख बड़ा ! कहते हैं सब,
दुःख को खुदा करने की आदत अब छूट चली है,
हृदय छोटा इसलिए दर्द बड़ा? अब सहज ही रहता हूँ,
देखो फिर से उन्ही अनजान गलियों में चल पड़ा हूँ फिर से,
फिर चोट खा जाऊं तो दर्द क्यूँ हो?



**हिंदी में पहली बार प्रकाशित कर रहा हूँ, हिंदी मेरे विचारों का पहला दर्पण है, पहला माध्यम है!
**First time publishing anything in Hindi, Hindi is my first channel of expression.

P.S. Hindi in english version is in the comments section, for my friends who are having trouble reading it in hindi script.

26 comments:

nOt anyone you know said...

*दुःख को खुदा करने की आदत अब छूट चली है,*

anshul babu, aap hindi me hi likha karen! =)

AS said...

hiii

very nice i must say! hindi is our mother tongue and the language we express our deepest feelings in thats why this poem seems to have touched me! keep writing :)

Tanvi said...

Phew!!! You know 'am bad at hindi but this piece was really good..
AAp hindi ke pandit banjaeeye......Thats all I can manage to say right now :P:P

And yes poetry hmmmm,,, :)
Good one!

Cheers,

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@not anyone you know
:-) Sirf ek koshish kii hai,
kabhi aur karunga, jab kuch likh paunga to sabko sunaunga.

@AS
Thank you

@Tanvi
ha ha ha, nahi re, panditya ke din ab peeche reh gaye hain.

Princess said...

I can not read it :( translation please ???

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Keh doon aaj ke patthar ki lakeer ho,
Kal mit jaaye to acharaj kyun?
Lakshman rekha kheenchne waale ne bhi na socha tha,
Bahya trishnaaein pravesh na kar paayein,
Man vichalit kar rakshit ke kavach bhed deta hai!!

Mastishq rekhaien kheench le asankhya,
Man ullanghan aatur hai,
Chot lagi thi kabhi beete kal mein,
Ab to yug beet chale honge,
Shayad, is baar kuch alag ho jaaye!!

Phir un puraane zakhmo ko kuredne ka mann ho aaya hai,
Dekhein dard ki wo tapish ab bhi baaki ho?
Kaise andhere the ve, jinme dafn ho jaane ki chaah thi,
Shayad peeche chhoot aaye hain ve andhere,
Aaj bahar se hi unki gehrayi naap kar dekhun!!

Maachis ki lau mein dekha tha ek chehra,
Dhoomil prakaash mein kuch ubharta,
Phir andhere mein hi leen ho jata,
Choona chaha to ek hansi chhod gaya tha mere haathon mein,
Ujaale mein aankhein moonde wahi sparsh talaashta hoon ab!!

Mera dukh bada, nahi mera dukh bada, kehte hain sab,
Dukh ko khuda karne ki aadat ab chhot chhoot chali hai,
Hridaya chota isliye dard bada? Ab sehaj hi rehta hoon,
Dekho phir se un anjaan galiyon pe chal pada hoon phir se,
Phir chot kha jaun to dard kyun ho?


I am highly skeptic if it'd help, but still, here you go Princess.

Cinderella said...

This is without a doubt, in my books, your bestest write on this blog Anshul!

"...कैसे अँधेरे थे वे, जिन में दफ्न हो जाने की चाह थी,
शायद पीछे छूट गए हैं वह अँधेरे,
आज बाहर से ही उनकी गहराई नाप कर देखूं!..."

How wonderful!

I second Bhavika. Aao kripaya hindi me hi likhiye. :)

Princess said...

Beautiful ....
I read it twice , a few lines I did not get but I am sure they are as much beautiful too !
Thank you very much :)
And these were the best line I liked : *Phir un puraane zakhmo ko kuredne ka mann ho aaya hai,
Dekhein dard ki wo tapish ab bhi baaki ho?

*Maachis ki lau mein dekha tha ek chehra,
Dhoomil prakaash mein kuch ubharta

*Dekho phir se un anjaan galiyon pe chal pada hoon phir se,
Phir chot kha jaun to dard kyun ho?

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Cinderella
I will try, par sirf Hindi mein hi likhna, wo shayad na ho paaye.


@Princess
Thank you Princess, glad that you liked it.

Jaspreet said...

Kya kahun ab main Anshul ji? Aap toh hindi mein bhi utni hi khoobsurati aur nipunta se likhte hain.Bahut hi utsahit karne vali, madhur kavita hai.Hamein yeh panktiyaan sabse zyada achi lagi:

चोट लगी थी कभी बीते कल में,
अब तो युग बीत चले होंगे,
शायद, इस बार कुछ अलग हो जाए!!
:)

Cinderella said...

Na na..didnt mean that, what I meant was you should do more of this. :)

Mehak said...

thank u for the hindi in english version. its great! very deep.

Mehak said...

you should publish your work somewhere. it's really goodddd!

Saumya said...

wonderful vocab....awesome expressions.....i liked it!!

कैसे अँधेरे थे वे, जिन में दफ्न हो जाने की चाह थी,
शायद पीछे छूट गए हैं वह अँधेरे,
आज बाहर से ही उनकी गहराई नाप कर देखूं!!

manish kumaouni said...

हिंदी मेरे विचारों का पहला दर्पण है, पहला माध्यम है!... kya bat hai anshul.. nice poetry.. beautiful title.. keep going

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Cinderella
I'll definitely try.

@Mehak
Thank You

@Saumya
:) Thank You!

@Manish
:)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

translation plz :(

sleeping beauty said...

wow! you write so well .i left hindi after 12th last i read was Ramdari dinkar . nice post hope u write more in hindi

Beyond Horizon said...

touching...rightly expressed abt d pain...last stanza is awesum :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Jane
See comments please, its there.

@Sleeping Beauty
I will try,thank you!

@Beyond Horizon
Thank you :)

A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...

Hey BA!

ur first poem in HIndi? very nice. Very beautiful.

desire to live breaks the boundaries set by our heart! Let them get broken... and live!

I too write in Hindi, will post sometime!

RESTLESS

Aayushi Mehta said...

This was beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. Do keep posting more poetry.

Komal Ali said...

I was disappointed to see it in all Hindi, but glad to see the PS. :)

Beautifully written...for some reason the lakshman rekha line laways fascinates me.

TC.

Ishi said...

hey nice wrk..though my hindi is not very good..but still i can very well appreciate the selection of wrds..tooo deep!!!
its very good initiative to post in our mother tongue..cheers fer that!!
:-)

mk said...

I can say that you have written really great in hindi>..
the emotions..philosophy...well versed..!!

mk said...

I can say that you have written really great in hindi>..
the emotions..philosophy...well versed..!!

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