Friday, September 24, 2010

Miss You!



I know am not talking like I used to,
Not even talking much, that is also true,
And I know these things are hurting you badly,
But sadly, you ain’t able to say all these things to me,
But despite of that I know everything my sweet friend,
What’s going in your mind and what you going through,
Even I know, because of this you are feeling blue,
Because of me you are bearing all this pain,
And I know that I am not,
Giving you the time that you deserve,
Which is making you go insane,
I know it’s all my fault and am the only one to blame,
What should I do to apologise for all this,
Tell me what to do?
I love you honey, and all I do is miss you.

*A poem that a very dear friend of mine once wrote to me. The first one for whom I'd fight, the first to penetrate my defenses.

34 comments:

Mehak said...

that's so incredibly sweet. i wish a friend of mine who's been avoiding me would write something like this for me. oh well...
long live friendship :)
cheers.

AS said...

hii

I feel this poem has a lot of essence in it and it reflects the intensity of your relation :)

nice

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Mehak
We have not met for about 3 years and a half now, but we are constantly in touch. I could never have written it the way it has been, I lack those emotions.

@AS
Yes, and is my dearest possession just like my friend.

ritika said...

aww.. i think, a poem is a best way to ask for forgiveness.. :)

Cheers!!

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Ritika
There are ways, but this one was unresistable. And that friend of mine, I have no complaints, I cannot have any.

Komal Ali said...

This makes me lament over what's up.

:) You're lucky to have a friend like him/her.

Bea said...

thats really nice... a true depiction of sincerity..

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Komal
Her :)
And yes I am lucky indeed.

@Bea
:)

Nostalgic said...

Deeply written! Each word carries with itself so many emotions :)

Cinderella said...

There will days of yore when cheesy stuff like this makes you tear up. and then there will be days, when you just dont have the appetite for it anymore - almost tending to unecessary, if I may say so. Every relationship goes thru such a versatile metamorphosis in its dynamics. Cherish it while you can!

Sunakshi said...

m running outta words..i so much loved this..one of the best piec i've read :)

Saumya said...

that's so sweet....such a pure reflection of thoughts....god bless both of you...

R said...

That's a very sweet and straight-from-the-heart poem :)

Anonymous said...

only some relations are for a lifetime...and i think this relation of urs is one of those...
lucky u that she is so caring... :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Nostalgic
agreed

@Cinderella
we've had our fair share of good and bad times. Its still strong.

@Sunakshi
Me too, thats why I wanted to share it with all of you

@Saumya
:) I have been blessed with that friend already

@R
Yes

@Anonymous
:) bless you.

Megha said...

wow...so sweet :) may your friendship flourish for ever :)

Princess said...

Finally ! I can open the site *yyeeeyy*

Nice poem ... simple ...
Indeed friends are like stars sparkling in our lives !

Sayak said...

A life without love is a life empty,
But with love comes woes aplenty.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Megha
With so many blessing, who can touch it now? :)

@Princess
Congrats, I was going to suggest you to use some other browser now(guessing that you might be using Chrome)

And true, friends are the stars.

@Sayak
And love too comes in many forms, affection is one of those.

Palak Vasant said...

Anshul, do such relations exist, forever kinds? I don't know I am touched...this one makes me wish a lot of things...Bless ya both!! P.S. your last comment on my blog was the best of million comments that I received (thanks, you probably gt the true essence of it)

Jaspreet said...

This is so heartfelt and cute too! A poem can be written only when you truly feel for something and each word of this one is so pure, and filled with honesty.Loved reading it :)

The Solitary Writer said...

that is sweet...i remember i had a friend who wrote such poems for me too....even i had some one who could write poems for me but shez not now :'( and that makes me feel sad... any way brother how are you doing?

long time.. u nt to be seen at my blog :)

Beyond Horizon said...

most precious treasure of emotions of a true n dearest frnd u hve wid u :)

Tanvi said...

Friendship the reason we live for!!!

Ah I have always tried to express what I feel for my best friend, but failed. This was perfect, someday I will succeed :D

Mr. Naive nice post :P

Ishi said...

truly touching..reminds me of wht we call true frnshp-beyond all wrds,beyond explanations..frns r those stupid creatures who will be lost all of a sudden-vl trouble u,evn if u don't talk daily0u alwaz knw dere is someone to be vth u wen u need them...frns r blessings!!

Madhu said...

whover wrote that..:P Awesome..:)

magiceye said...

wonderfully penned emotion

guess what the word verification was? 'painking' lol! eerie

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Palak
Thank You, and yes, such relations can exist.
And about that comment, I wrote what I felt like.

@Jaspreet
Thank You

@Solitary Writer
am doing just fine. :) Oh and I have been visiting, be assured.

@Beyond Horizon
:)

@Tanvi
Try try again, you'll get it. And even if I am naive, I know that a female heart can help her express more than us. :P

@Ishi
Thank You

@Madhu
:)

Angels Never Lie said...

beautiful poem...true emotions can be seen here...nice blog :)

Devil Incarnate... said...

Beautiful poem, full of emotions...
straight frm the heart..!

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@Angels Never Lie
:) thank you

@Devil Incarnate
:) yes, I agree.

Princess said...

hoping the error does not occur again ! if it did then will surely take your suggestion ...

Ria said...

Thats truly heartfelt!! Loved the real emotions.

Sh@s said...

This is Oh so sweet...You are lucky to share such a beautiful bond.

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