Friday, July 16, 2010

Wait!



Inside these peels like onion,
Inside this carnal shell,
Sulks a lonely heart,
 Waiting to get hurt.

Craving for a bruise,
From its healer.


Now I’ll post it, even if they are just 4 lines. Got the idea from a beautiful blog while blogwalking. Here’s the link

27 comments:

magiceye said...

neat!

The Phoenix Rising said...

Short but good. The fewest words or movement can make a huge impact. That' what made Bruce Lee a legend only after 4 movies. Facial movements and short philosophical sayings. And then he kicked ass and took names later.

Aparna said...

to get hurt to be cared and healed by a loved one


nice thought!

Cinderella said...

sulking...yet waiting to be hurt?

This went above me head.
:(

Nikita said...

peals like onion...loved it.

that is what human beings are like too..we need to unveil peals one by one to get inside the real person..

picture speaks a thousand words..

Anonymous Someone said...

@Magiceye

So is your comment, thanks

@Phoenix Rising
Yes, sometimes only a word is enough to break something, and sometimes to last for eternity.

@Aparna
Its like the one we love, we give them every right, to love and to hurt...and to get hurt by them is a pleasure in itself because they are the ones who'll heal us.

@Cinderella
I'd say that love can be strange.

@Nikita
Exactly, a personality unfolds slowly.

Komal Ali said...

Craving for a bruise from it's healer...
Ungrateful, aren't we?

ambiguous_angel said...

aw. really nice:)

Jaspreet said...

Exactly...the heart wont understand..it will yearn for the one who hurts it badly and will keep doing it even after getting hurt!!

Tanvi Nimkar said...

Love is forever and it never stops, though it may give you pains :)
Its all in human nature!!
Keep blogging :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

hi.thanks for the wonderful comment at my blog :D

TurbulentMind said...

"Craving for a bruise
From its healer"

True to the core..Amazingly written :)

Anonymous Someone said...

@Komal Ali
'Lovers' is a different creed, hard to understand.

@ambiguous Angel
Thank you

@Jaspreet
yes

@Tanvi
I surely will, until I can.

@Ayu
You are welcome

@Turbulent Mind
Thank you for appreciating

Rajat said...

"craving for a bruise, from it's healer" how could the healer hurt and if the healer hurts then how it can be healed...

Sayak said...

The lonely heart cries,
The tear formed,
At the corner of the eye,
After a moment dries.
In a stifled attempt,
To hold back the hurt, to belie.


Wonderful! :)

Nostalgic said...

Craving for a bruise,
From its healer.


Says a lot. Utterly beautiful!

♥ ♥Duchess ♥ ♥ said...

thnks for the visit..
u hav a nice space as well..!!
i loved wt u wrote on my post..awesome.
keep visiting if u like:)

ritika said...

Deep, intense, beautiful!! :)

Anonymous Someone said...

@Rajat
The one's we call our 'own' only can hurt us, and also heal us.
Thanks for dropping by.

@Sayak
Nice lines

@Nostalgic
Thank you for appreciating

@Duchess
Sure

@Ritika
Thank You

Ria said...

Strange love for sure...why wud anyone like to be hurt!?

Beyond Horizon said...

wudnt it hurt more????while waiting 4 d bruise 2 b healed by d 1 who created it

mk said...

"Craving for a bruise
From its healer"

hmm, sometimes we just fear the worst ..
but what could happen?..
its not the bruise,
nor the pain inside..
but just the wait..
to open up..hurt the most?

just one view of mine..but you write deep!! beautiful proses!!

Saumya said...

very intense and touching...thank you for being on my blog!

Anonymous Someone said...

@Ria
Because all is fair in love and war.

@Beyond Horizon
well, one touch does it all, sometimes.

@mk
yes, the fear of what happens next, true.

Thank You

@Saumya
Thank You too :)

Quaintzy Patchez said...

Nice blog you've got there :) i liked this one!

Palak Vasant said...

The heart cries a million cries in front of the face u love. Yet there is no way you can escape it, all u want is more I totally agree......

Hiba said...

deep and touching... so many truths that we deny.... to be hurt and healed by the same is what we desire...

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