Friday, July 30, 2010

Crumbled?


Crumpled papers
With poems of you
Writ with words
That won’t ever come true

Ingrained on a fabric
That’ll never fray
The hopeful words
I wish, I could say

Hands still shaking
As I continue to write
Scribbling meagre letters
In black and white

Across this darkness
Blinded, as I wend
With these broken pieces
That I cannot mend

Eager to tell you
How I feel
Just praying I could prove
My love is real

27 comments:

nikita said...

awwh...

hope she realises soon your love is real..
it was beautifully expressed- crumpled papers..

Komal Ali said...

:) Aaah. There are mostly beautiful stories related with crumpled papers, tissues, and even bedsheets...

Love it!

Jaspreet said...

Wow!!!! it's so touchy n beautiful :) I just don't understand why does anybody have to prove that love is real? It reflects in the eyes and in the words!

Saumya said...

profound and touching....beautifully expressed!

adreamygal said...

So touchy ..true , the most difficult task in the world in the world is to express your love .. especially in words .. Lovely frame of the helpness ness :)Hope she reads it and understands your love :)

Anonymous Someone said...

@nikita, komal and dreamygal

right now she exists as only my figments of imagination. so apparently she knows how i feel. :-) thank you for appreciating.

@ komal
thank you.

@jaspreet
true. but then some say that love is blind. how can it see.

ritika said...

You come up with most beautiful of the expressions,

Another piece of great poetry!!

Cinderella said...

This I think is your best compositions to date.

Loved it.

Beyond Horizon said...

awesum :)

with no fear...no shiver....just go ahead n express ur love :)

true love nvr hve 2 b proved dat its real

pH_the priness said...

I hope you have your love soon :)
beautiful poem !

Vagabond said...

i read it, re-read it trying to come up with a befitting comment.
failed.

it is very real.

Tanvi Nimkar said...

Love is blind, but if you go by that thought it hurts. Love is to feel, it can be seen in the eyes,and every gesture. Its real only if you believe it is. And its blind if you close your eyes. Love is just love. Create your own definition of it.

Nice post!

Mehak said...

as usual, it's beautiful and touches the heart. i love every stanza!

sakhii•• said...

wow!!..this is wonderful..!

Anonymous Someone said...

@Ritika
Thank You

@Cinderella
The best is yet to come. :)

@Beyond Horizon
:) I won't hesitate when I find her.

@pH Princess
Thank you

@Vagabond
Am elated, delighted...am flattered. :P
Thank You, your comments encourage me.

@Tanvi
Thank you, and yes what you said is true.

@Mehak
Thank You

@Sakhii
Thank You. :)

Sayak said...

It might be soon,
It might be late,
To be loved, is a boon,
She'll find out, she won't regret.

Ria said...

beautifully worded!!

Megha said...

very nicely written, feelings of hope and despair evident in every stanza...

ambiguous_angel said...

aw. that's beautiful.
i loved it.
so sweet.
it shouldn't be on crumpled paper,
it should be here,
making us amaze..:)

Matangi Mawley said...

that was beautiful!!

Sunakshi said...

Without a doubt i thoroughly enjoyed this one too. :)

mk said...

hmm...true from ur heart...a wait..a desire to tell..
as the words unfolds with this piece of paper..love florish..nice one!!

Aayushi Mehta said...

This is so simple and meaningful, hits all the right chords.

wildflower said...

all that pain, and you still rhyme! :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

@sayak
So true, I believe it too...

@Ria
Thank You

@Megha
Thank you.

@Angel
Here it is, don't know about the amazing part though. :)

@Matangi
Thank You

@Sunakshi
Am glad you liked this one too...

@MK
Thank you

@Ayushi
Thank you

@Wildflower
Pain often triggers some emotional flow.

Gazal Bharadwaj said...

Don't prove.
Love speaks for itself...
That what is true need not be proved to anyone.

AS said...

hii
wow! i loved this poem
very simple and sweet :)
keep writing!

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